Today, I will write a paragraph about diversity and why is it important to respect it? So, the next paragraphs will tell you what is cultural diversity and why is it important to respect it.
1) Cultural diversity is a diversity, or variety, in culture, in which people have different skin color, rituals, language, religion, political view, food, etc.
2) I think it is really important to respect other people culture, not because of their skin colors or rituals, or language, or etc., we rejects them. We should respect other, if we don't, then we will have conflict with other cultures, not understanding them, by respecting the diversity of cultures, we can know each other better, have teamwork and can prevent conflicts.
This is my evaluation to myself:
Trả lờiXóaWord Choice: 2
Sentence Fluency: 2
Organization: 3
Proofreading: 2
I could improve by improving the four things that I will mark on: Word Choice, Sentence Fluency and Proofreading, I can write longer and add more detail to it. That's all what I got to say about my writing.